Empathy
Choose an important moment in the story for one of the character.(ie. what that character would put into his or her personal diary for that day when the important thing happened). Try to write in a style you think fits the character's personality.
Dear Diary,
It was a special week for me , because Jane Bennet came to visit Mr.Bingley and his sister, in order to dine with her. On her way to get here, she was riding her horse, but the wheater was really bad. So shortly after she arrived here, she got really sick.
She needed to stay in Netherfield for a while, she wrote a letter to her family to inform them she's sick and she won't get home soon. So her sister Elizabeth Bennet decided to come and look after her.
She is not such a good rider as her sister so she had been walking the whole way. The two Bennet sisters were very happy to see each other, and Elizabeth took care of Jane. Elizabeth didn't want to leave Jane so she also decided to stay here. As Janes Situation wasn't improving, the whole family Bennet came to visit her, and i think Bingley's siter wasn't very happy about the whole situation with the Bennets. She think Elizabeth is not very elegant or stylish, or beautiful, she anayway sees the whole Bennet familiy as under our niveau. But i can't see what she is talking about. As Elizabeth Bennet stayed here i realized, she's an ountstandingly interesting person, and i think she's so beautiful in her own unique way.
So i wanted to show her my affection, but she's always a bit gruff towards me. And Binlgey's sister Charlote is acting kind of jealous, i think it's because she like me a lot.
Because of those things, it's a better idea to show less affection, otherwise i'm maybe getting rejected from Elizabeth Bennet, but i definitly want to get to knoe more about her.
Greetings Darcy
268 Words
Choose an important moment in the story for one of the character.(ie. what that character would put into his or her personal diary for that day when the important thing happened). Try to write in a style you think fits the character's personality.
Dear Diary,
It was a special week for me , because Jane Bennet came to visit Mr.Bingley and his sister, in order to dine with her. On her way to get here, she was riding her horse, but the wheater was really bad. So shortly after she arrived here, she got really sick.
She needed to stay in Netherfield for a while, she wrote a letter to her family to inform them she's sick and she won't get home soon. So her sister Elizabeth Bennet decided to come and look after her.
She is not such a good rider as her sister so she had been walking the whole way. The two Bennet sisters were very happy to see each other, and Elizabeth took care of Jane. Elizabeth didn't want to leave Jane so she also decided to stay here. As Janes Situation wasn't improving, the whole family Bennet came to visit her, and i think Bingley's siter wasn't very happy about the whole situation with the Bennets. She think Elizabeth is not very elegant or stylish, or beautiful, she anayway sees the whole Bennet familiy as under our niveau. But i can't see what she is talking about. As Elizabeth Bennet stayed here i realized, she's an ountstandingly interesting person, and i think she's so beautiful in her own unique way.
So i wanted to show her my affection, but she's always a bit gruff towards me. And Binlgey's sister Charlote is acting kind of jealous, i think it's because she like me a lot.
Because of those things, it's a better idea to show less affection, otherwise i'm maybe getting rejected from Elizabeth Bennet, but i definitly want to get to knoe more about her.
Greetings Darcy
268 Words
Nicely done. The only thing I can say is that the style doesn't quite sound like Darcy to me. But of course that is very difficult for us to do, because his character is 200 years old and we don't use the same elegant English any more.
AntwortenLöschen