Empathy
Say in what ways you wish a character would change/ develop or what you would like to happen in the life of some character.
The person i'd like to change his character a little is Mr. Bingley. Is maybe not the right thing to say he should change his character, it's more he should express his character more. The only time when i saw him so far, doing something without any advice from someone else, was when he decided to dance the most with Jane Bennet on the .... I think he listen to much to his sister, who seems to have an a little dissatisfied character. I also think he counts a lot of Mr.Darcy's opinion, who also is mostly suspicious towards anyone. And i think that's a pitty, because Mr.Bingley appears openminded and mostly cheerfull. He should listen to his own mind, because that would be more helpfull for him, to discover his true love towards someone and admit it. I think it would be interesting to me as a reader , if he would reveal his personality more.
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Say in what ways you wish a character would change/ develop or what you would like to happen in the life of some character.
The person i'd like to change his character a little is Mr. Bingley. Is maybe not the right thing to say he should change his character, it's more he should express his character more. The only time when i saw him so far, doing something without any advice from someone else, was when he decided to dance the most with Jane Bennet on the .... I think he listen to much to his sister, who seems to have an a little dissatisfied character. I also think he counts a lot of Mr.Darcy's opinion, who also is mostly suspicious towards anyone. And i think that's a pitty, because Mr.Bingley appears openminded and mostly cheerfull. He should listen to his own mind, because that would be more helpfull for him, to discover his true love towards someone and admit it. I think it would be interesting to me as a reader , if he would reveal his personality more.
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